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Behind the mask.. im not that what you think i am by Odrios
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this looks amazing! I love this! I wish I could animate like this! overall I love the affect the eye has. how the hand is grabbing the ...

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Behind the mask.. im not that what you think i am by Odrios
this looks amazing! I love this! I wish I could animate like this! overall I love the affect the eye has. how the hand is grabbing the face as well. I love the way your logo blends into the background as well. anyhow this is my first critique so I honestly don't know how to write one. I think your animation skills would be great with mmd in my opinion. Anyhow over all this was amazing. I'd love to see more like this. mabye a series of them?.....also I was wondering do you have a youtube channel cus I'd love to see animations!!
Bullet; Red Artemis rped by me
Gold bullet Luminos rped by TyphlosionForLife 
word count
Artemis: 185
Luminos: 294
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Bullet; Red Artemis walks into camp flinging prey off of her back onto the fresh kill pile

Gold bullet 
Luminos walked into camp grunting about whatever the heck was bothering him this time. He gave Artemis a nod to acknowledge her before walking over to the food pile, his squad dissipating after him.

Bullet; Red 
she sat down to eat tearing at the prey, something was on her mind, she was worried about something, but what?

Gold bullet 
Luminos rummaged through the pile before picking up a mouse, freshly caught by the hunting patrol. He licked his lips in anticipation as he had not eaten that day yet

Bullet; Red 
"Well somebody's hungry" she teased

Gold bullet 
"You would be too if you hadn't eaten all day" He said annoyed, flicking an ear

Bullet; Red 
"I haven't. This is my first meal in 2 days thank you very much."

Gold bullet 
"Starving yourself isn't good, I don't need some cat dying because she stupidly decided to starve herself"

Bullet; Red 
"its called a diet, excuse me"

Gold bullet 
"You're skinny enough as it is, It's flooding and we're running out of food. At this rate you won't even need to go ona diet as we're running out of food" He growled

Bullet; Red 
"well your certainly cranky for someone who just became a father" she grumbled and continued to eat

Gold bullet 
"being a father has nothing to do with being cranky, I'm mad because you not eating in two days is concerning and as your co-leader I'm ordering you to eat at least once a day. It's dangerous to not be eating, expectantly in times like these where food is starting to become scarce" He hissed

Bullet; Red 
she mimicked him as he talked and laughed "I'm sorry, Its just your so serious when you can just ask nicely and I would do it. she laughs"

Gold bullet 
Luminos flattened his ears. "I have a million other things to worry about I'm not being all nice just for you"

Bullet; Red 
"of course mom " she rolls her eyes, she didn't like how he got all full of himself ever since becoming co-leader, she remembered when they were friends, but now he just seemed to be cranky all the time.

Gold bullet 
Luminos rolled his eyes at the she cat. "I you're going to be like that the least you could do is call me dad" He responded

Bullet; Red 
she laughed "I need a serious talk with honey to fix your attitude"

Gold bullet 
"like that will help, my attitude is fine"

Bullet; Red 
she finished her food and licked her lips "well, I'm going out to hunt again see you later!" she swishes her tail as she walks away.

Gold bullet 
"Good luck" he said as he began his meal
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RULES:
  ❥ Use a www.random.org/ to select your answers.
  ❥ Tag your rivals.
  ❥ Have fun during your adventure!
......tagged by animalmoon 

You started your Pokémon journey:
1) At age 10.
2) At age 15.
3) After finishing high school.
4) After finishing college.
5) As far back as you can remember; You grew up in the wilds with Pokémon.
6) No idea; You suffered an accident that erased your previous memory.
it is iresponsible to let a ten year old run around. 

The weather was:
1) Sunny.
2) Sunny with some clouds.
3) Cloudy.
4) Rainy.
5) Snowy.
6) A natural disaster.


You started your journey because:
1) You want to be the very best.
2) You want to catch ‘em all.
3) You want to be a master coordinator.
4) You want to meet many people.
5) You want to discover new Pokémon.
6) You want to explore lost places.
 like no one ever waaas! 

Your starter Pokémon is:
1) SHINY BONUS (use Random Pokémon Generator)
2-6) (use Random Pokémon Generator)
Charmander 
so I wanted to make it traditional and it actually be a starter, so I kept on generating till I got a starter and this is what I got. I don't mind cus I love charmander, but I would have loved a Snivy XD
In the beginning, your starter:
1) Was practically your twin.
2) Became your friend immediately.
3) Liked you.
4) Was wary of you.
5) Disliked you greatly.
6) Tried to kill you.
YAY!!!

The first great obstacle of your journey was:
1) A rival battle. 
2) A treacherous route.
3) A wild Pokémon attack.
4) A Pokémon gym.
5) A battle with a criminal team member.
6) A sapling.

At this obstacle, the two of you:
1) Triumphed with little resistance.
2) Achieved victory, though it was tough.
3) Won, but just barely.
4) Tied with the opposition.
5) Lost, though you put up a good fight.
6) Failed miserably.


The second Pokémon you caught is:
1) SHINY BONUS (use Random Pokémon Generator)
2-6) (use Random Pokémon Generator)
Zoroark


Your starter and second Pokémon:
1) Love each other dearly.
2) Are good friends.
3) Get along well enough.
4) Don’t seem to like each other.
5) Ignore each other.
6) Are constantly at each other’s throats.
I'm gonna die..

When the sun begins to set, you:
1) Set up camp immediately.
2) Make a fire. You need nothing else. 
3) Watch the sun set.
4) Keep walking. A lack of sun makes no difference to you.
5) Break into a run, hoping to find shelter before nightfall.
6) Pick up camp. You only travel at night.


You pass through civilization:
1) Often enough to keep your electronics charged.
2) At least once a week.
3) If it happens to be on your way.
4) Occasionally, but only for supplies.
5) Rarely, and only on the outskirts.
6) Never.
tottaly like me. XD

Your third Pokémon is:
1) SHINY BONUS (use Random Pokémon Generator)
2-6) (use Random Pokémon Generator)
lapras 


The three Pokémon on your team:
1) Work together flawlessly.
2) Cooperate well, but could use some work.
3) Have moments of synergy, though not often.
4) Try their best, yet are on completely different beats
5) Constantly work against each other.
6) Blame you for their horrible collaboration.
Ey. Im actually pretty good at leadership when i try

When the going gets tough:
1) Your team pulls through every time.
2) Your starter carries the weight.
3) You come up with a brilliant solution.
4) You win by hax.
5) You win by dumb luck.
6) You get going the opposite direction.


Two evolutions have occurred by this point:
1) Starter and 2 evolve.
2) 2 and 3 evolve.
3) 3 and starter evolve.
4) Starter evolves twice
5) 2 evolves twice.
6) 3 evolves twice.
OMG I HAVE A CHARIZARD
charizard

Over time, you find you work best with and mostly train:
1) Grass, Bug, and Poison types.
2) Water, Ice, and Flying types.
3) Fire, Electric, and Fighting types.
4) Ground, Rock, and Steel types
5) Dark, Ghost, and Psychic types.
6) Normal, Dragon, and Fairy types
At least it has normal and dragon
dont know what to feel about the fairy type doe

Your fourth Pokémon (type #1) is:
1) SHINY BONUS (use Random Pokémon Generator)
2-6) (use Random Pokémon Generator)
Sandshrew
SO  CUUUTE


Your fifth Pokémon (type #2) is:
1) SHINY BONUS (use Random Pokémon Generator)
2-6) (use Random Pokémon Generator)
Aerodactyl
OOOOOOO

Your sixth Pokémon (type #3) is:
1) SHINY BONUS (use Random Pokémon Generator)
2-6) (use Random Pokémon Generator)
Lairon
eeeehhh....

You are offered a trade, and it’s up to you to take it or leave it:
1) SHINY BONUS (use Random Pokémon Generator)
2-6) (use Random Pokémon Generator)
GOODBYE STEEL TYPE 
Sylveon
OMG SYLVEON YYAAAAS

Another evolution occurs:
1) Starter evolves.
2) 2 evolves.
3) 3 evolves.
4) 4 evolves.
5) 5 evolves.
6) 6 evolves.
okay. XD MY STARTER IS AT FINAL EVOLUTION, SO IS 2, AND 3, AND 5, AND 6. HELLO SANDSLASH.
sandslash

Your team:
1) Is your family.
2) Gets jealous whenever you interact with other trainers.
3) Would protect you from anything.
4) Is loyal to you, but mostly aloof.
5) At least tolerates each of their differences by this point.
6) Is a pretty much a big, chaotic mess.


You travel mostly by:
1) Well-worn footpath.
2) Overgrown trail.
3) Water.
4) Air.
5) Cave.
6) Wilderness.
I GET TO RIDE MY CHARIZARD!!!
Another evolution occurs:
1) Starter evolves.
2) 2 evolves.
3) 3 evolves.
4) 4 evolves.
5) 5 evolves.
6) 6 evolves.
everyone is at their final evoltuion.

Your journey takes you:
1) Not far from home.
2) Across the region.
3) To another region.
4) Across many regions.
5) Around the world.
6) To places unknown.


The strongest Pokémon you faced in battle on your journey was:
1) SHINY BONUS (use Random Pokémon Generator)
2-6) (use Random Pokémon Generator)
Beartic

Another evolution occurs:
1) Starter evolves.
2) 2 evolves.
3) 3 evolves.
4) 4 evolves.
5) 5 evolves.
6) 6 evolves.
 none of them can 

The event with the greatest impact on you was:
1) Becoming a Pokémon Champion.
2) The grand evolution of a team member in a dire moment.
3) Finding a hidden landmark of great beauty.
4) Encountering a legendary Pokémon.
5) Having an out-of-body experience in a haunted building.
6) Discovering you’re a child of Mew.


❥The hardest trial you ever faced was:
1) Fighting your rival to become Champion.
2) Realizing just how much you have to walk and still sticking out this whole journey thing.
3) Being lost for weeks.
4) Assisting in taking down a criminal organization.
5) Losing a Pokémon.
6) Realizing there are way too many Pokémon to ever catch ‘em all.
I'm stupid XD

Your starter:
1) Is your strongest Pokémon and best friend.
2) Is your good friend, but far from the strongest.
3) Is your strongest Pokémon, but emotionally distant.
4) Is about the same as the rest of your team.
5) Stayed behind some point during your journey.
6) Is deceased.
YAY

And you are now:
1) Gambling all the money you’ve earned in the Celadon Game Corner.
2) Hidden away at the top of Mt. Silver for an indefinite amount of time.
3) Exploring the many islands littered in the oceans surrounding Hoenn.
4) Lost in the Distortion World after a mishap in the ruins at Mt. Coronet.
5) Trolling inexperienced trainers in the Driftveil World Tournament.
6) Reflecting on past decisions beside the monument of Geosenge Town.
YAS



The team that saw you to your journey’s end:
Charizard.
Zorrarak.
Lapras.
SandSlash.
Aerodactyl.
Sylveon.

I TAG: Bunnylover3443 , jerseytomboy527 , SirenOfPeace 
  • Listening to: Batman v Superman Sountrack
  • Reading: My Little Pony Omnibus 2
  • Watching: newest episode of mlp
  • Playing: Pokemon Go
  • Eating: Chicken
  • Drinking: Water
I'm restarting I guess. I'll just update this journal.
Adopt one today!
Adopt one today!
Adopt one today!
  • Listening to: Batman v Superman Sountrack
  • Reading: My Little Pony Omnibus 2
  • Watching: newest episode of mlp
  • Playing: Pokemon Go
  • Eating: Chicken
  • Drinking: Water
Bullet; Red Artemis rped by me
Gold bullet Luminos rped by TyphlosionForLife 
word count
Artemis: 185
Luminos: 294
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.
.
.


Bullet; Red Artemis walks into camp flinging prey off of her back onto the fresh kill pile

Gold bullet 
Luminos walked into camp grunting about whatever the heck was bothering him this time. He gave Artemis a nod to acknowledge her before walking over to the food pile, his squad dissipating after him.

Bullet; Red 
she sat down to eat tearing at the prey, something was on her mind, she was worried about something, but what?

Gold bullet 
Luminos rummaged through the pile before picking up a mouse, freshly caught by the hunting patrol. He licked his lips in anticipation as he had not eaten that day yet

Bullet; Red 
"Well somebody's hungry" she teased

Gold bullet 
"You would be too if you hadn't eaten all day" He said annoyed, flicking an ear

Bullet; Red 
"I haven't. This is my first meal in 2 days thank you very much."

Gold bullet 
"Starving yourself isn't good, I don't need some cat dying because she stupidly decided to starve herself"

Bullet; Red 
"its called a diet, excuse me"

Gold bullet 
"You're skinny enough as it is, It's flooding and we're running out of food. At this rate you won't even need to go ona diet as we're running out of food" He growled

Bullet; Red 
"well your certainly cranky for someone who just became a father" she grumbled and continued to eat

Gold bullet 
"being a father has nothing to do with being cranky, I'm mad because you not eating in two days is concerning and as your co-leader I'm ordering you to eat at least once a day. It's dangerous to not be eating, expectantly in times like these where food is starting to become scarce" He hissed

Bullet; Red 
she mimicked him as he talked and laughed "I'm sorry, Its just your so serious when you can just ask nicely and I would do it. she laughs"

Gold bullet 
Luminos flattened his ears. "I have a million other things to worry about I'm not being all nice just for you"

Bullet; Red 
"of course mom " she rolls her eyes, she didn't like how he got all full of himself ever since becoming co-leader, she remembered when they were friends, but now he just seemed to be cranky all the time.

Gold bullet 
Luminos rolled his eyes at the she cat. "I you're going to be like that the least you could do is call me dad" He responded

Bullet; Red 
she laughed "I need a serious talk with honey to fix your attitude"

Gold bullet 
"like that will help, my attitude is fine"

Bullet; Red 
she finished her food and licked her lips "well, I'm going out to hunt again see you later!" she swishes her tail as she walks away.

Gold bullet 
"Good luck" he said as he began his meal
  • Listening to: Batman v Superman Sountrack
  • Reading: My Little Pony Omnibus 2
  • Watching: newest episode of mlp
  • Playing: Pokemon Go
  • Eating: Chicken
  • Drinking: Water

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